Dear Roger Schlafly,
I enjoyed reading your essay. It is really clearly written and thoroughly accessible, even to someone without a maths or physics background. You have set out your arguments very clearly and I might have been convinced had I not previously given this subject quite a bit of thought.
You wrote "It is time to accept the non-mathematical nature of reality, just as it was time to accept the non-Euclidean geometry of spacetime when H. Poincare proposed it in 1905." I'm sorry that I must disagree. In my opinion it is not that the universe can not be described mathematically but that the structure of reality has been inadequately comprehended, so that the mathematics when applied are inadequate to describe all of its facets in their correct relationship. That might sound like nonsense but it is explained more methodically in my essay and accompanying diagrams.
I also think that mathematical relationships are inherent to the structures and patterns of the universe and those relationships are also the forces for change. Mathematics "in vivo" is not identical to the mathematics modelling our observed reality. That does not make the unobserved reality non mathematical. This view does open up new possibilities for mathematical representation and new considerations of how numbers and sets relate to a broader view, the physics of the entirety of reality.
Having disagreed with you, I would like to say that there is a lot in your essay that I do like, it is very good, well constructed and thought provoking. Good luck in the competition.