Dear Benjamin,
I found your essay to be one of the most all-encompassing in the contest. The paper paints a fairly complete picture of the current state of things and yet it is not lacking in details. It surely merits the high rating it has received.
One comment I can pick out that especially triggered a response is:
"Causality is often formalized at the classical level as an irreflexive, acyclic, transitive binary relation on the set of spacetime events."
I agree. Though the approach I wrote about is classical or semi-classical, and therefore embedded solely in U(1) topology, the rigorous consideration of rotations really requires formulation in SU(2) or higher topologies because of the difference in rotational characteristics of the electric and magnetic fields, path dependencies and the cyclic nature of waves. Then the algebra accommodates reflections and cyclic relations. And there the non-commutative nature of the algebra naturally leads to quantization.
It's hard to picture just what you mean when you make this intriguing statement:
"I will call the relation induced by these transitions the universal relation, and each of its subrelations a kinematic scheme. Under suitable assumptions, a pleasing fractal picture emerges, in which kinematic schemes share most of their abstract properties with the causal relations of their constituent universes, and quantization becomes an iteration of structure, at least locally"
Perhaps that is related to the point made in the essay at note 1. The statement conjured up reflections on an interesting but perplexing book "Fourier Analysis on Finite Groups and Applications" by Audrey Terras. I've not yet fully fathomed its nuances but the author demonstrates how Fourier Analysis and associated sets can be used in a surprisingly general series of applications where the domain can be interpreted as having some type of cyclic basis. She doesn't mention Quantum Mechanics, as I recall, but maybe there is a natural fit there.
Congratulations on a fine essay,
Steve