Hi Doug,
I find the point that you raise in your essay extremely interesting.
I even went to read your PRL from 2011 to clarify for myself a few technical points.
Though I think the discussion above with Jack Mallah needs to be continued. I would like to reformulate a bit here what is at stake. Suppose that we are in an Einstein's elevator: the equivalence principle tells us that we cannot know if we are in an accelerated system or in a gravitational field - the physics that we "experience" is the same. Yet one can simply open the door of the elevator and check what is the actual situation: are we standing on some planet or are we in some accelerating spaceship, etc. Is the measurement of the Unruh versus Hawking temperature and correlations that you describe in any way different from the situation described above? Somewhat I would think that what happens is that you find a way to extract global information from a local measurement of the radiation. This is still interesting of course, but does it mean at all that the equivalence principle is broken? In some sense, there could be something more fundamental here that I am not catching, for example one would think that the Hawking and Unruh effects are a inescapable consequence of QFT, therefore the situation is different from just opening the door of the elevator and acquiring information about the surroundings. In this sense one can say that global information will inevitably be present in any local frame. Though I find this argument weak, because also with the Hawking/unruh radiation I can choose to shield them by "metalizing" my elevator (making it a Faraday cage).