Dear Mr. Leshan
I will comment Your essay can in eight main points:
1. Your sociological analysis of development of quarks theory and other physics.
2. Arguments against quarks.
3. Argument against Higgs boson.
4. EPR paradox in cosmological expansion.
5. Only point particles are elementary.
6. Virtual gravitons do not exist.
7. Mass of black hole is lower than mass of starting star.
8. Your Hole theory of gravitation.
Answers to points:
1. As I read this, it is fascinating. So, please write more.
2. It seems to me like science fiction, because a lot of tests of quarks were made, not only scattering of electrons and neutrinos on nucleons. But, if you are correct, my formulae for hadrons are correct.
3. I need to learn more about Higgs mechanism. I please for more arguments. If you are right, my formula for electron is correct and my theories of quantum gravity and uncertainty principle are correct. They are very simple.
4. I suspect that you are wrong, but idea is good and need to be corrected. My suspicion is based because you here do not use any speed c of ~>c for communication. This is one thought experiment in semi-quantum gravity and maybe one corrected version will be so successful as Hawking's black hole. I have also one such thought experiment with rocket on photons propulsion.
5. I think that hadrons are composed particles. But, it is a wide possibility, what is composed particles. For instance in my theory hadrons are built up from pions on some still unknown way.
6. I agree with you.
7. My theory is, that interior of black hole does not exist. So this partially eliminates this problem.
8. I am not sure if you are correct. I need to read more about this.
It is a problem because I do not have enough time to precisely judge essays. (The problem is also because some judge without messages and arguments.) But, if only one of points above is correct, you deserve 10 points. I hope that this will give you less than 35. order to placing in continuation.
Best regards, Janko Kokosar