Hello Emily,
Thank you for your reply. I agree that if we have to question evidence or assumptions, it's often better to questions assumptions.
I just reread your essay - to me you show the limitations of certain theories very well, by showing what happens when they're applied outside their domains of validity. One reductio ad absurdam you set out is that according to statistical mechanics your essay was more likely to have arisen by chance than be written. I think one more positive side of your work is that it might contribute to defining the boundaries, as we probably need a more exact understanding of what that sort of physics can and can't describe. To me, having shown these limitations to that sort of physics, it's a pity if you then take the theories as being actually applicable in those domains, as you sometimes seem to.
I'm trying to understand your idea about memory - you say:
"For although the claim that we are at a local minimum of entropy is inconsistent with the history stored in our memories, it is not inconsistent with the existence of those memories - they, together with the order we perceive around us, could have been created by a spontaneous fluctuation rather than by the events they apparently report."
So a random fluctuation might have caused all of our memories, and the order we percieve around us, to come into existence? I just don't understand how so much order, and consistent order - our memories tend to agree on things - could arise from a random fluctuation, whatever one thinks about the way in which memories are stored. Wouldn't a random fluctuation be likely to create something very much more... random? Douglas Adams once described a planet covered entirely with luxery hotels and casinos, that had all been 'carved out of the rock by the natural processes of wind and erosion'. To me, your idea looks a bit like that. Surely the order we find around us is more likely to have appeared in the kind of way we think it did, but with gaps in our knowledge about it.
And where you talk about applying probabilities to the history of the universe - to do that you tend to need to know everything. It seems to me that because we don't, we're not in a position to do that.
I think what I may be seeing underneath your essay is a different version of something I find in many places nowadays - the implicit assumption that we now have all the pieces of the jigsaw in front of us, and only need to arrange them correctly. No-one would actually say that, but people nevertheless think and write as if it were the case. Many people are 'shuffling the principles' at present, making basic principles that were thought to be fundamental become emergent, and vice versa. I've had a discussion with Ben Dribus about this - personally, I think rearranging what we have will not be enough. In my essay, I remind people that there must be missing pieces, and that we need to allow for them, and try to guess - from the clues we do have - what the clues we don't have might look like.
And this principle of 'allowing for unknowns' would be very helpful in your discussion about QM and the Everett interpretation. It seems likely to me, and to many, that the real interpretation of QM is something different from all of our 5 or 6 present alternatives, all of which have their own problems. If so, feeding in what we have now and assuming it's everything will only give nonsense out, which is I think what you do, and what you get. I know you intend to show that many of these avenues of thought simply don't work, and I think you're right, you show that very well - to me only your suggestion about why they don't work is wrong.
Anyway, best wishes, Jonathan