Dear Theo,
I am particularly grateful for your essay, if only because almost every other essay in this contest involving dark matter is unreservedly negative. Coming mostly from the math side, I am presently somewhat agnostic about dark matter, following Holmes' observation that "it is a capital mistake to theorize without sufficient evidence." In such a scenario, one needs evidence from more than one side! Also, you include a splendid level of connection to what is already known. Hence, your submission rates quite high in my opinion. A few more thoughts:
1. I am wondering to what extent the evolution of a particular Jeans cluster, in regard to whether it would form bright globular clusters or become very dark, could be expected to depend on its relative location within the galaxy, and to what extent this would be determined locally? The reason I ask this is because obviously the distribution of dark matter in galaxies is not the same as the distribution of bright matter. I am wondering if the GHD of Jeans clusters predicts quantitatively the distribution seen. Maybe this is implicit somewhere in the paper; for instance, does the reference [40] you cite at the end of section II A give evidence of this?
2. Besides rejecting dark matter entirely, it is also popular to insist that it must involve only one mechanism. It is refreshing to see a submission that avoids this assumption.
3. Thanks for the 75 references. A veritable trove for someone trying to orient himself concerning the subject.
I enjoyed reading your work! Take care,
Ben Dribus