Dear Jin,
An interesting and original derivation and essay. Frankly reading it was a nice break from reading just of it's and bit's, but then I too an am astronomer with a great interest in galaxies as important features and indicators.
You were not alone getting a score of 1. I too got the same within what seemed a few minutes of posting! I don't apply scores until I've read most but yours is certainly worth more than that insult. There have been many others not exactly rigidly 'on topic' in the past.
I hope you'll read comment on and score mine. Although this years is not about astronomy it is I hope on a seminally important subject.
Well done, and Best wishes
Peter