Hello John,
what a nice, concise, sensible essay. However, I found it somewhat dry. And I wish it was longer. That is because I very much enjoy reading your posts in various threads and also in Brendan's blog. I noticed that most people express themselves better in the posts -- their thoughts are more engaging and flow easily. But I guess when faced with that empty sheet -- or blank monitor screen nowadays -- many tend to tense up and start speaking in grave pronouncements.
You wrote:
"Bias is fundamental to the construct of knowledge, so it needs to be factored into the model. Whether it is a particular perspective, or a generic model or pattern inductively distilled from circumstance, knowledge is a focused distillation of a larger context."
I could not agree more. I also speak in my essay about how our perception of the world is limited by what sort of info our senses and sensors are able to get. In our discussions of the nature of reality, we often forget how biased we are by our familiar, habitual vision of the world. We also assume that we know everything there is worth knowing. I allude in my essay that there are other types of info out there, waiting to be discovered with either improved or entirely new technology.
I also noted in Brendan's blog your interest in the neuroanatomy. For this reason I am curious to know your opinion about the end part of my essay. You will notice the style is very different there (very non-academic, to say the least, lol). You may notice that the flow has a rhythm and even some rhymes, there is a strong emotion, and the analogies are very graphic. The language is very simple and action-oriented.
The reason for this is that I wanted to engage the right hemisphere into the discussion that is traditionally dominated by the left. Hence very simple terms (right hemisphere does not understand abstractions). The right hemisphere is good at seeing a picture as a whole, as if seeing it from high above. It is able to grasp in one glance the relationships between various components of the whole, how they all fit together -- something the left hemisphere, due to its inherent linearity, has a hard time doing. I am not saying that the right is better than the left, only that the 2 working together in tandem are better than either one alone.
Anyway, I did not quite do it on purpose. It happens naturally with me when the right hemisphere "wants to participate" I can see it in the style of writing. I did not change it, as i normally do, but submitted the essay as is, partly because it was already due and partly as an experiment. I'm afraid most people are shocked by it lol. But I am curious to hear you opinion on this.
Anyway, regarding your essay: very good but I wish it was longer and in not academic but your usual, casual style, reading which I so much enjoy.
-Marina