Thanks, Paul!
1. "I like your approach to pictorial depictions (e.g. Fig 2) but am concerned that it may have some limitations. For example, you say that the two primitives are not temporally ordered, but it seems to me that they are: by the inputs and outputs to other common elements (primitives)."
By the (formal) definition, event1 "precedes" event2, if some initial links of event2 are the terminal links of event1 or of some other event which event1 "precedes".
2. "Also, your formalism (as it is at present) appears static, making it difficult to deal with evolution of links and primitives."
Please note that the struct evolves when new (relevant) events occur. So that the whole thing is evolving with time.
3. " In a nutshell, I would like to see you express the concept of reversibility and dynamic evolution more fully in your formalism."
Paul, the ETS formalism suggests that there is no such thing as reversibility: you cannot undo the events that have already occurred, even though some of the "parameters" may coinside.
Thanks, again!