Dear Michel - It took three readings of your paper before I understood it. However, I think it was worthwhile. There are some extraordinarily provocative ideas here, and as soon as the contest is over I plan to follow up and read your other publications.
I particularly enjoyed your recognition of bipartite graphs being at the heart of reality (a two-player) two qubit setup.
Introducing Grothendieck's dessin d'enfant was a stroke of genius. A wonderful tool to cut to the heart of the matter and expose the underlying simplicity of our universe.
I was somewhat taken aback by the appearance of what appeared to be a random integer without reference in many places in your essay (e.g 12096 guys), until I realized that you were using the Magma software.
There may be an unfortunate spelling error in the first paragraph under 3.3. Mermin's pentagram: If I am not mistaken "Peceptual" should be "Perceptual". At first I thought it was some new word or concept in in projective geometry I was unfamiliar with, but then discovered I could not find the word in a web search.
All in all this is a great essay and I gave it very high marks. I look forward to following up on your other publications at a later time.
Good luck in the contest.
Kind regards, Paul