Edwin, continuing: Let's next talk about "any fine points" before returning to the central section of your response.
A - Fine points: The essay is intended to be error-free and typo-free so that any "puzzles" may be addressed confidently by the Reader -- with minimum fear that there's a bug in the system, so to speak. Consequently, to anyone, finding something that halts or niggles or grates or jars, etc, it's, "Please let me know; I'm from down-under and I'm here to help."
Perhaps the "finest point" is that the underlying theory is extremely comprehensive YET based on what is essentially high-school maths and logic. That is, from such simplicity we arrive at a goal that I associate with both Planck and Einstein (even Bell): "The quantum is classical" -- a view that I understand is akin to your own.
Now: It seems this above point is not popular -- to the extent that making comments on the theory is evidently considered to be "beneath their dignity" by most of my supposed critics over the years -- to the extent that the theory is not worthy of even one word to explain why their promised reviews are not forth-coming.
Even here, at FQXi, there are those who allocate low ratings without one word of criticism -- despite my earnest requests for such!
So, to illustrate some of that simplicity, let's turn to:
B - the central section of your response:
Starting at -- as you understand the problem -- but in my terms: Yes, Bell is clumsy with his lambda in that the lambdas in the particle duo pi and p'i are most certainly NOT the same as those in ANY OTHER pair!
So we can slightly tighten your understanding: "Unless and until someone shows how a second particle-pair can be produced, with exactly the same generalised, unconstrained hidden variables that applied to the first particle-pair, then this is, as we say, unphysical, i.e., impossible."
We then come to this; me trusting that I've edited it correctly -- in line with your thinking -- re which particles are involved:
"Consider, as an example only, that lambda is a 'phase angle' of the wave function common to the first particle-pair. There may, of course exist an analogous phase angle in another entangled particle-pair. But there is no way to measure these phase angles (except statistically via 'weak' measurement) and no grounds to assume that they are equal from one particle-pair to the next."
Yes! Thank you; though phase-angles of wave functions, per your example, are not here required per note (**) below.
Then, with some editing, we have:
"But this is implied by Bell's PAIRING of lambdas in 14(a) and 14(b) while -- clearly and correctly -- such lambdas -- specifically lambdai and lambdan+i -- CANNOT be so paired."
Yes, with my thanks again. **BUT please be critical of my changes to your phrasings BECAUSE you appear to be rightly bridging my theory to QM -- a job I'm happy to leave to others -- and my understanding in that area will be improved via any valid amendments or criticism that you might make.
With my thanks again; Gordon