Dear Zoran,
Your essay is highly perplexing to this sort of essay contest where you find mentally physics oriented people participate and they usually no nothing about this sort of article fit to be published in philosophical journals; this is the reason your essay is currently undervalued although it deserves a very high rating. But I can understand the significance of your article, because I am a philosopher and I have read as one of my special subjects Kant's "critique of pure reason". You have also developed your ideas on the basis of his philosophy, especially, epistemology. So I can understand your thoughts and also how much energy you have put behind this article and the mental stresses and strains you have undergone. By just understanding Kant you cannot develop ideas like this but for this you have to 'meditate' over how he formulated his metaphysics and as a result of your meditation you have been able to write this sort of essay. For this sort of effort, I congratulate you. I feel, you could have written in a much more simple form by treating the relationship between It and Bit in the back ground of his distinction between "Noumenon" and "Phenomenon". You have beautifully summed up your epistemological considerations in the simple sentence "intuitive space-time is sandwiched between metaphysical and conceptual domains".
You have discarded Time as fourth dimension and considered only three dimensionality of Space as sufficient to cognize and explain the events taking place in the world. You have connected this idea to explain the Big Bang and Black- Hole radiation; but, here, I feel, you are not clear in connecting your ideas to explain these processes. So think more on this and also think of including Time in to your conceptual network.
Considering the mental effort you have put up behind this essay, I am going to give you full (maximum possible) rating now. Have a look at my article and express your valuable comments on it in my thread and I sincerely hope you will do this. If you have not found conclusions of my essay satisfactory, please, point out the defects.
Wish you all the best in the essay contest,
Sreenath