Good Paper. Starts off slow, repeats the same stuff about Wheeler found in other essays in this contest. Then goes on to discuss our language issues with the notion of time, and makes some rather interesting points.
I wholeheartedly agree that Minkowski spacetime does not exist. However, the relationship between space and time does exist down the single direction of propagation of quantum particles, not in some empty manifold we call Minkowski space. "Elements of reality" are therefore bounded by the emitter and absorber atoms. This is where an "interval" in time can be considered. In section 3, your claim that "no interval of time exists..." needs a reference.
I am not convinced by the world-line argument. This is just another attempt to regenerate a form of simultaneity surfaces. World-lines do not exist unless something travels along it. I do not find the argument for block universe compelling, even if it is a dynamically warping and molding thing.
The section on Minkowski space was a little jumbled and confusing.
I enjoyed the description "relativity of synchronicity." Very nice.
This is a strong entry and I gave it a good rating. The author would have done better with a shorter introduction and a focus (in two sections) on the Newtonian and Einsteinian inconsistencies in the relativity of synchronicity, then in the concluding section added the claims of novelty that he wished to make.
All in all, a worthy paper I will look forward to reading other works from this Author.