Dear Dr. Haynes,
It was most interesting to see how you place the evolution of ZKBB in the context of the history of modern physics. A very informative and well written essay.
At the beginning, you mention the nature of mind - how we reconstruct reality in our reflective minds. I write about this in some detail - how every species ultimately perceives the underlying reality in its own way, thus spinning its own Species Cosmos over evolutionary time.
It would appear that the human mind is evolving in correlation with its field of observation, and changing contiguously with it - thus establishing the relationship of Bit and It as one of correlation.
This is an important and daunting point - for it means that Information is in perpetual flux, and facts can never be absolutely nailed down, nor can they be extrapolated consistently to the same conclusions.
I understand that you want to express ZKBB purely in terms of physics, but I think there's great value in also contextualizing physics in a cosmic and biological evolutionary paradigm. It can help us to new conclusions. An objection that could raised to your paradigm is that it begins with one electron and one proton, and that assuming stable particles as a point of origin naturally configures into the system a great tangle of parameters that only emerge later - in the context of the fully formed Cosmos.
The solution to this might be to set the point of origin, as I do, in an omni-dimensional energy field, within which there must exist other cosmic systems - and to account for the primal particles of the original BEC in terms of this energy field's complete freedom in creating variant dimensional systems.
The Big Bang is then replaced by the perpetual equilibrium shifts of this Field, offering many interesting conclusions concerning the nature of your primal cosmic fabric, and of particles themselves.
There is no way to summarize this here, but hopefully you'll find as much to interest you in my essay as I found in yours.
I look forward to hearing your views, and wish you all the best,
John