Dear Lee,
Thanks for your post and attention to my work! I think you did not read it carefully and fully, but no problem here! We cannot study every work in details in this short and tensioned time! Moreover, our works directed to a definitely different targets and are written in different styles! However, I want tell you honestly that you have offered nice written review article which is interesting to read.(I suggest you to check recent observation of authors R. Penrouse & V. Gurzadyan - about possibility of Cyclic Universe. You can it find in arxive.org)
I am going to rate your work as a ,,good,,(8)only. You see as right for you!
Best wishes,
George