I liked the essay, but find these essays hard to rate. While this and others explore the area, they don't really seem to come to grips with the core aspects, in the same way that brought Hume to say 'Consign it then to the flames: For it can contain nothing but sophistry and illusion.'
This is a general comment, not specific to this essay. This was one of the better essays, I felt.
The connection between minds and worlds, under the GPE (see my essay) is that the Harmony Set may have several equivalent interpretations in the same way that a top hat functions can be replaced by a Fourier series, or redistributed values in higher dimensions. Which interpretation is the 'right' one? None. Which has priority, or is the foundational space? None. But these spaces are ontologically locked together. One might propose that one of these interpretations gives rise to mind.
Stephen Anastasi.