hi Richard
i took a couple of minutes to edit the first couple of paragraphs of your paper
so you might see my interpretation, and also with an eye to conciseness...
i hope all is well with you, i you don't mind my limited unasked for input
The Unification of Physics
Introduction
this paper proposes a new common-izing direction to physical theory by constructing a unified worldview. AT present there are many differing description ie. (theories of general relativity, quantum mechanics, quantum electrodynamics, string theory and the standard model of particle physics) all based on differing concepts. The approach here starts with an assumption that "the theory of general relativity" is a complete and comprehensive description of spacetime at all levels, and then recovers all other theories by the utility looped spacetime.
As review, the papers written by Albert Einstein reveal he proceeded with a number of thought experiments to reach his conclusions. First he worked out that a constant speed of light leads to certain conclusions about Minkowski
space time. The theory of general relativity then simply involves an additional abstraction of the equivalence between uniform acceleration and gravitational effects. He realised that space coordinates could not be Euclidean and
that Gaussian coordinates were needed; which then tells us that the effect we experience as gravity is due to the curvature of spacetime. The presence of mass curves spacetime so that there is an energy difference between an apple
hanging in a tree and an apple on the ground due to the mass of the Earth. The same principle is universal and ensures that the moon follows its orbital path.
The theory of general relativity is a fully complete, and comprehensive upto any abstract(or so thought of domain).However, general relativity does not explain how an object with mass curves spacetime. As part of the theory of
special relativity it was found that there is an equivalence between mass and energy in the sense that conservation laws must be changed so that it is mass plus energy which is conserved with the possibility of conversion between
mass and energy following the equation
E = mc2