Thanks for the link. I have read it and its previous versions now several times. I have liked your uni-temporal time as a second time dimension that is absolute and part of object reality, but it has gone away. Too bad.
What is not really clear is what problem are you solving? You might consider a clear problem statement and then the measurement or method that you propose to solve that problem.
You say,
..."Measurements of seen images are muddled with measurements of material objects. The 'information' derived universe is taken to be THE reality..."
So you suppose there are two kinds of measurements: seen images and material objects. But seen images are one of many kinds of measurements of material objects, so really there are just measurements of material objects.
You propose an object reality that represents things in and of themselves. This implies that there is also a subjective reality of things as how they appear, but you do not use that word. Instead you say "seen images". Why not just use the standard word subjective?
You further propose that there is a hidden variable that you call provocation and if science simply measured provocation (your lion box metaphor), the measurement would no longer show the quantum properties of superposition and entanglement.
Bohmian mechanics and pilot wave theory and superdeterminism are all the same kinds of approaches that suppose hidden variables for quantum phase. Many people believe devoutly in superdeterminism but none of these approaches have ever been useful for addressing quantum problems. So good luck...
I like it that you have a nice methodological approach and you should consider a few graphics to illustrate your points. Also, science papers usually follow an outline of abstract, introduction, methodology, results, discussion, and conclusion and you might consider a similar approach.
In other words, you need to describe your methodology and results first and then discuss how your methods and approach compare with others. The way that you have it structured mixes your methods up with those of several others. You seem to agree with Maudlin and so does that mean that you use his methods?