Ted,
You make some excellent and highly valid points showing the failings of market incentives and the 'dog eat dog' approach to bringing advancements. We may think somewhat alike as I was raised in a fishing family and I'm now a governor of the Lifeboat Institute and offshore representative level race helmsman. I certainly agree your thesis, which was well presented and certainly worth a high score. Some of my favourite quotes are;
"Abstraction is the ability to see patterns of relationships. It seems that there are potentially infinite levels of abstraction and awareness available to us, and most of those appear to be potentially infinite within themselves." That's exactly my approach to nature, exposing far more than maths alone can.
I've also written on the atrocious situation with 'privileged access' to research and lobbied with success for open access policies. But I'd never imagined quite that outlay! It's quite criminal.
My essay goes a different route and is quite unique in showing that a 'quantum leap' (to classical logic) is possible in our understanding of nature, with massive implications. Our present science is patch on patch on bandage on splint on sticky plasters. I had to smile at your;
"Forcing a skilled gymnast to use a Zimmer frame to reduce the risk of accidental fall is not an acceptable outcome." That applies to science too, it needs a zimmer frame now but I show it's really a gymnast. However those familiar with the zimmer frame have no vision. I hope you like my allegorical tale and can support the hypothesis (10yr olds can now understand 'QM' in this way!)
Very well done for your essay, like a good haul, rich with abundant valuable species to feed everybody if we can get the distribution right and honest.
Best wishes
Peter