Dear Michael Allan,
I'm not sure I would define reason as the supreme value, but it's a good working premise.
We agree on (M2) promoting a maximum of personal freedom compatible with equal freedoms for all.
Your M1 relates to collectives and I have more problems with "collective", which, while really existing, is an abstraction that has different order of reality from the individual. I live, eat, breathe, experience, think, create, etc. etc. The "collective" is a very different entity. If it is like a beehive, it is the overwhelming reality, almost a hive mind. If it is humanity, it is approximately 8,000,000,000 humans, very different from the hive. My essay focuses on maximizing personal freedom and warns about a "collective" based on two classes.
I like your statement:
"But people are numerous. They can explore many paths simultaneously; so that, if a given action does not reduce anyone's freedom to act, then it can hardly reduce the likelihood of eventual success. Success depends on opportune discoveries to which the formal theory is blind"
Very nice. Douglas Singleton and I have both applied physical theories as metaphors to say the same thing.
Also like your image of the individual as hero, hand on the tiller,... and I like "a recombinant text allows for, but cannot in itself formalize and express a consensus."
I'm not sure I've absorbed your "transitive voting" but I have spent quite a bit of time trying to design systems whereby an individual's vote is related to the effort and expertise that an individual has invested in understanding the issues being voted on. Like you, I believe this is best implemented by some formal system that is blind to individuals, while somehow measuring effort and expertise. This relates to your "public sphere" on page 5.
I do like "in all such instances, the first demand of reason will be the question, Why? From what cause and what purpose would we execute this plan? Or enforce this law?"
Excellent!
I also think that a mythopoeic perspective is appropriate, although I am unsure that a 'guideway' to make myth is. Loren Eisley was a good "mythopoet" without guideway.
I am of the opinion that myth as you define it is more likely to arise from individual (Jesus, Buddha, Einstein,...) and be refined and reinforced by a collective.
Thanks for putting the amount of thought that you have into such systems and let me encourage you to continue to do so. I hope you will have time to read and comment upon my essay.
My best regards,
Edwin Eugene Klingman