Hello Mr. Allan,
This is Margarita Iudin
I read your essay without rating it. I stopped rating essays because I feel confused about how the authors rate each other.
Before I read your essay I liked how you organized your comments. Now I want to say you that you submitted very good essay.
These are my remarks
1. the essence of humanity, words, just words
2, E. Kant moral values, reason, it is always good to mention Kant
Mythopoeic overguidance, sounds heavy, even negatively, why?
Mythopoeic
I remember once I encountered the word mythopoetic in relation to Einstein
4. What laws of nature do you mean?
5. endless continuum of rational being
what about escaping from the physical body, destruction of the body, cleansing and rebirth of a soul I am not sure we understand each other
6. procedural theory, procedures, software computing terminology
7 Strange understanding of what freedom is
Seems to be a flight of imagination
8 a primitive scheme of voting,
preliminary, because all of them would be preliminary
In TDSB school grade 10 students learn about 3 levels of the Canadian government and that the voting as an important feature of democracy
The voting procedures may work properly, democracy itself does not work
Where are the responsible citizen-voters ? Why voters are unable to make competent decisions?
Think about the voting in Ukraine
8 I like your approach to myth and storytelling
http://fqxi.org/community/forum/topic/2096
Imagining the future humanity by Margarita Iudin
Please read my essay on your convenience and share your opinion.
Good luck,
M Iudin