Hi Chidi,
I think you did in your essay a lot what Niels Bohr did in trying to grasp what quantum mechanics brought in our thinking and how we could think quantum mechanics. So let me quote Niels Bohr to comment on your essay:
"We must be clear that when it comes to atoms, language can be used only as in poetry. The poet, too, is not nearly so concerned with describing facts as with creating images and establishing mental connections."
High regards
Luca