Hi Doug
Congrats, this is indeed an intriguing Essay. Here are my comments/questions:
1) I think you implicitly dedicated this work to Richard Feynman.
2) Has Kardashev's classification of civilizations any link with stellar classification? I suspect this because he was an astronomer.
3) I find the "Historical Path Integral" by James Burke which starts from the standardization of precious metals till nuclear weapons and energy very enlightening for clarifying what you point out in your Essay.
4) I agree with you that number of publications and citations are not great measures of actual scientific progress.
5) You emphasize that deciding on how to weight a particular societal path is very subjective and may lead to different groups choosing different paths as best or "classical". Is this the analogous of the probabilistic behavior of quantum mechanics in your nice metaphor?
6) I appreciated a lot the subtle irony that you used in some points of your Essay, in particular in the last discussion concerning the conflict between the non-scientific "cherry picking" of data which helps politician get re-elected and the scientific faceless data which, although being informative, will not help politicians get re-elected.
You wrote an very enjoyable Essay. I am going to give you an high score.
I wish you all the best in the Contest.
Cheers,
Ch.