Dear Edwin,
What a fantastic article is this! It held my opinion through out and pray it will do extremely well in this competition.
Your model of thermodynamics (first law) and Newton concept were my foci point in establishing a balance between technology and ecosystem. I will also want you to read the article STRIKING A BALANCE BETWEEN TECHNOLOGY AND ECOSYSTEM. For easy access considering the enormous entries you can find it on this link http://fqxi.org/community/forum/topic/2020
I will also anticipate your criticism and rating.
Wishing you the best in this competition.
Gbenga