Hi Kristen,
Nice video and a very clear explanation of the underlying thermodynamics involved. Is there a special reason to use HFC-134a as the working fluid? I assume it has some good properties that make it well suited for refrigeration. Alternatively are there other fluids that can be used?
Another cool way of cooling things is via a peltier cooling device which also leads to heat transfer but via an electrical current.
As a non-physics comment we also used a Kevin Macleod piece for the music in our video ("Moment of Inertia...."). I've seen several other videos that use his music.
Good luck with the contest.
Mike, Max, Dan, Simon, Doug