Dear Theodore St. John.
Thank you for taking time to decode my essay; it was only an experimental writing, like a Gedanken experiment in the writing, to show that a story is nothing more than transfer of ideas; and it is not important the temporal order of a speech.
I am thinking that a speech is like a physical experiment, with a temporal order, if there is not much interaction between parts of speech, then it happen like in the fundamental physical processes (time symmetry).
I had thought of something more elaborate, a random distribution of the proposition (that work like a cinematographic flashback), but somehow the writing form reinforces the idea that it is not necessary a teaching linked to the history of scientific discovery (temporal order), because alternatives are possible, and the meaning is not lost (civilization can exist in which scientific discovery has followed alternative ways).
I read your essay, and I see the Pythagorean school more like a religion, if not a cult, mathematics so that there was historical heresies, and this does not happen in physics.
Your writing is interesting, a good experiment, and Einstein has in the name the legend of King Arthur.
The equal sign is a new symbol, invented in 1557 by Robert Recorde, the zeros was invented in the 628 by Brahmagupta, before was a chaotic life for mathemaricians, but mathematicians existed, then the current equations were not so necessary.
It is interesting that we are free to choice a definition of time evolution, then every motion has instant velocity unitary
Respectfully
Domenico Oricchio