Dear Prof. Hestenes,
Congratulations! You've outdone himself with this paper! Never have you explained your tremendously influential and successful Modeling Theory with greater clarity and power or reached so deeply into the realm of the mind, exploring the relationship between mental and formal conceptual models!
Your anchoring of your ideas in the work of Emmanuel Kant and adaption of the "cognitive linguistics" explanation of how models relate to the "real world" have more firmly relocated the objects referenced by language to mental models inside the mind. Yet the goal remains clear: to build our ability to construct models that can successfully map the world as it exists, though that world remain forever beyond the ability of our minds to directly know it.
This work, and the Modeling Method of Physics Instruction - as taught to me by Dwain Desbien who was then a graduate student in your group at Arizona State University and communicated through your lectures and many papers - transformed my teaching and touched the lives of many of my students. That system fell short however when I attempted to apply its methods to lower-level math classes, or even to physical science classes for deeply mathematically-challenged students. The Models of Mathematics that you identified, the models the course "Integrating Mathematics and Physics" in your group's Modeling Instruction program focused on, were evidently beyond the reach of these students, not sufficiently fundamental to address their difficulties. Some 12 years later, I see no sign here that you have taken your models of mathematics to the new and more fundamental level I was seeking.
Comparing this paper with "Mathematics of Science" by your sparring-partner Rob MacDuff (elsewhere on this FQXi contest board), your influence on each other is evident; yet at a fundamental philosophical level you diverge. For while you seem resigned to mathematics remaining a self-referential body of rules (which it certainly is now), MacDuff holds out the tantalizing prospect of freeing it, or at least freeing science in its use, from this constraint.
You refer to mathematics as "the science of structure," where "mathematical intuition matches mental structures with symbolic structures," but distinguish it from the rest of science with "mathematical models have as referents only themselves," You quote Saunders MacLane approvingly, "... mathematics is not concerned with reality but with rule," and sanctify this universal doctrine with your closing words: "Kant put his finger on the source of this stunning revolution: the use of rules to harness the powers of human intuition."
MacDuff has challenged this doctrine that math must be a purely self-referential set of rules, that it can have only itself for a referent. His critical break with you and with all of mathematics of the recent past is the introduction of a set of axioms and models of science that have as their referent observable and inferable properties and structure of objects in the real world, a system that has sufficient internal consistency to construct a mathematics from it. He thus places mathematics firmly within the realm of science rather than as an exception, as an embedded and integral part of the structure of science rather than as a supporting discipline adapted to its purposes.
I look forward to seeing the fruits of your ongoing dialogue with MacDuff. I am however concerned that he gets so little acknowledgment from anyone within the Academy. Given the widespread evidence from teachers that MacDuff's ideas and the CIMM curriculum developed from them have solved the problem of communicating mathematics to the vast numbers of students who are currently excluded or marginalized by its difficulty, it behooves the academic community to overcome our instinctive but natural resistance to heresy coming from outsiders and give his work a closer look.