Hi Torsten
Since I am not conversant with hyperbolic geometry and quantum physics, I cannot pretend to have understood all the fine details present in your modeling of the neural network, but I certainly found it to be intriguing, since my own essay was attempting a different type of modeling, that of the social system. What I found most interesting about your model was that the top-down flow of neural activity is more predictive of conscious awareness than the bottom-up flow of activity. You go on to state in the conclusion, "Top down causation refers to the effects on components of organized systems that cannot be fully analyzed in terms of component-level behavior but instead requires reference to the higher-level system itself".
Speaking purely from what I would expect to be the case for intelligent systems, (without much knowledge of the brain as an organ), I would expect such top down causation to be present if a system is to be considered as intelligent. And although I have not thought about it in precisely those terms in my essay, I think you might be able to recognize this top down behavior in it as well. I think you have written a great essay and I rate it accordingly.
Warm Regards, Willy