Thomas,
Your essay is an interesting journey.
Reading your essay, I feel like I've entered an interactive phantom world in which I'm bathed in neutrino radiation -- which I know we all are. I know that the quantum world does a number on us to the tune of some 7*1027 atoms. I never thought of the quantum (gravity) world being interactive with consciousness but you almost poetically declare neutrinos at the speed of light showed us a classical world. Like that.
It's mind boggling.
If you want to assemble yourself, I like to hear your comments on my essay.
Regards,
Jim Hoover