Dear Sofia,
I have enjoyed reading your thought-provoking and very well-written essay.
In my way of looking at things (which could be wrong), I would make a distinction between mind (with its thoughts) on the one hand, and consciousness on the other [in the human context].
The thinking mind derives itself from the physiological functionality of the underlying brain, and is aware of the flow of time.
On the other hand, for me, consciousness refers to a [hard to define] self-aware state, which is not associated just with the brain, but with the whole body as such. It can be felt but cannot be pinpointed to. Consciousness transcends mind and thinking, and is a state in which there is no perceived flow of time.
You probably disagree with the above, but I wonder what you think of the mind versus consciousness divide, and how does it fit in your scheme of things as laid out in your essay.
Thanks and regards,
Tejinder