Thanks for your comments! There are indeed quite a few issues with my proposal that have yet to be worked out in more detail. But I gave a very general perspective on how to get to large biomolecules that can take part in interesting catalytic reactions.
I guess I could have explained things a bit better and in more detail. What happened was that two days before the deadline I took the bold step of ditching the essay I was working on and starting all over again with an essay on abiogenesis. Unfortunately, this has led to quite a few typos and badly written sentences in my essay (submitted about an hour before the deadline without proofreading).
Now, about the collisions, note that as pointed out in this recent article, the largest impacts that happened during the Late Heavy Bombardment period were an order of magnitude larger than previously thought. Impacts involving proto-planets that are, say, 250 km across are fiundamentally different than impacts involving 10 km diameter asteroid. In the latter case, very little of the debris escape the planet that is hit. In the latter case, not only will large amounts of the ejecta escape, a significant fraction of these will escape without having been significantly affected by the impact.
When pointing out just how large the KT impactor was, people will often say that when that asteroid hit Earth, the back side of it was still 10 km up in the air. But now picture this proto-planet hitting the Earth, when such a thing impacted the Earth in the LHB period, the back side would still be at the height were our low Earth orbit satellites are!
Then what happens is that the impact lasts 25 times longer than a KT-like impact, you'll then a get a lot more rebounding debris from the impactor that have not made contact with the Earth. While this is still a violent process, when it comes to transferral of microbes, there are far more opportunities compared to smaller impacts. One is then led to considering the transferal of microbes to Earth via fragments created by an impact on another body, say the Moon.
I'll read your essay; it may be interesting to make a list of all the essays on this topic, there are a few more I've seen but they can be hard to find among all the listed essays here.