Hello Gibbs,
A very well written essay. I enjoyed your essay a lot; though some parts were out of my qualification, I tend to understand your essay carefully.
Believe me or not, but both of our essays have the same way of literature. You choose one topic and defend whether it could be fundamental by providing facts and logic which is same as I do in my my essay.
In fact, some of our lines coincide; like this particular one:
"Philosophers of physics discuss the emergence of the universe from nothing, but what is nothing?" where you define nothing as everything, while I define it in terms of mathematics, as zero (0)
I liked this line which gives a sense of motivation "Particle physicists should not give up on the hierarchy problem in particle physics just because they think they have tried everything." I have also used a sense of inspiration at the end of my essay.
At last, you conclude that mathematics and physics are required to solve the problems and it is indeed true which is reflected in my essay as well.
Anyway, I enjoyed your essay and wish you a great luck in the competition.
Kind Regards
Ajay Pokharel
It just requires mathematicians and physicists to bring their knowledge together.