Dear John Rider Klauder,
In response to a comment above, you note that "the current rule sometimes leads to nonsense." and elsewhere,
"The usual rule of the relation of a classical/quantum connection fails sometimes."
I confess not to have followed your complete argument, however it seems to derive from Dirac's interpretation of all contact transformations in which the classical transformation has a role to play in the quantum theory.
The classical variable is either random or varies with respect to something. If it varies with respect to something, say z, then we typically form an 'operator' of the form O ~ d/dz, and the formalism that results (incorporating h) is a quantum theory. It is difficult to see how the quantum operator could possibly be more fundamental than the classical variable from which it is derived, and, in fact, the correspondence principle insists that the quantum operator equations must be derived from the appropriate classical Hamiltonian. This seems compatible with your statement that
"The Hamiltonian operator is the same function of P and Q as the classical Hamiltonian is of p and q ... [plus o(h)]..
I will not repeat your logic but will say that I agree with your conclusion that
"The special role played by Cartesian coordinates in canonical quantization is essential."
Your goal, as I understand it, is "an alternative quantization procedure relating classical and quantum variables to each other", and your derivation of equation (5) seems to yield the correct classical action function without the need to modify the quantum operators at all.
I did not follow your switch to affine variables, but, to return to your point that "the current rule sometimes leads to nonsense", I would note that Steven Kauffmann (viXra:1707.0116) has shown that the Dirac equation was not derived from a classical Hamiltonian, but was instead influenced by 'space-time symmetry' considerations, and, accordingly, leads to some nonsense results, such as particle speed ~1.7c. Additionally, the result of Dirac's equation is a spin that differs from Pauli's eigenvalue spin; in fact Dirac does not have a spin eigenvalue equation, and such is obtained only after a Foldy-Wouthuysen transformation smears a spin over an extended region (viXra:1411.0096 ).
If you're wondering where this extended comment is leading, it is the fact that Dirac based his equation on space-time symmetry considerations and my current essay treats the development of space-time symmetry concept. I hope you will read my essay and comment on it.
Thanks for a very interesting essay,
My best regards
Edwin Eugene Klingman