Dear Karen
You picked a good theme for this years essay, and you are accomplished in that you did the subject good justice. Congratulations of a great essay and a great score. I hit you with a 10 but it wasn't sufficient to move you up to 7.7. But it will have pushed it closer to that tipping point
I just want to give you a quick run down, why you might read my essay with a view to measuring it by your check list. I'll make this short but the essay, if you should read it, is more comprehensive.
You have identified the prospect that a Quantum Gravity Theory might present means of unifying Quantum Mechanics and General Relativity. With this in mind, please consider the following approach?
Quantum Mechanics and General Relativity, two fundamental theories of one world. However QM and GR have clocks in common, in terms of clocks being a study in QM (made of QM), and GR being a study of clocks (time dilation). Two fundamental theories, servicing one world and two fundamental theories serviced by one device? QM might be surmised, a study of forces (clock springs). GR might be surmised, a study of time (clock faces). But clock springs and clock faces are connected via shaft, from which you can deduce they are locked in proportional motion with each other. When you consider that clock springs drive the clocks function, and the clock hands but follow the springs instruction, (making clock hands superfluous in terms of being a physical cause or influence). Then when you consider how gravitational environments modulate a clocks rate of function, then have your minds eye look past the superfluous clock face, and instead look to what effect is imposed on clock springs. Quantify the springs parameters and you will see the term "force dilation" is justified.
QM is a study in the clocks back end function, where the forces reside and issue their cause. GR, gravitational environments impose effects on clocks, but consider the prospect of those effects being imposed foremost on clock springs. GR is translated as a consideration of QM force dilation. This is a unifying effort well worth following up on.
My essay then goes onto extend consideration of force dilation, within context that atomic activity/forces/work are derived from a field energy potential of space. Guv = Tuv representing the nature of the interaction between matter and space whereby space field is converted to atomic forces. Guv field providing Gluons with the capacity to generate force/mass, and Gluons then have the capacity to convert force to motion, "gravitational acceleration". That is a pretty simple and straightforward approach to QG theory that ties QM and GR together.
The Guv space field owes its origin to Auv, or Dark Energy. Which it is possible to interpret as a continually regenerating universal field. I go onto hypothesis that the Baryon universe might owe its existence to this Auv field, which serves as a natural energy potential Baryons have evolved structure and agency to best exploit. So we arrive at a junction whereby we are inquiring after Darwinian principles to question universal systems, order and process. That the universe might be an example of nature having been given a natural energy potential, it invented a circumstance of Darwinian emergence.
You place a large emphasis on the challenge faced by fundamental theory, in transcending the length scales. For example, what type of unified field theory might transcend and encapsulate all length scales? Consider biology and how it is serviced by theory which mitigates this issue. Biology is serviced by systems on various length scales, sub cellular, cellular and multicellular, and even societal. And all these systems being modular in building compound biological structure and complex organisms. The theory of Darwinian Evolution connects and translates all of these length scales within a common and seamless context. Darwinian Evolution applied to atomic field theory, would conceivably achieve the same result. Sub atomic, atomic, molecular, cosmological scales all bridged by common context of being an evolved system. Not only unifying the length scales, but conceivably providing the context for rationalizing universal order and complexity, of universal system structure and process.
I know this will all seam pretty far out there, but there are not many theory types which have prospect of qualifying your listed criteria for fundamental. This theory might be considered for review based on novelty, because logic can be applied to it and it does extend prospective answers to your criteria list. I think you might have some fun with it, and putting your essay rationale to the test.
Thank you for your consideration
Kind regards
Steve
Darwinian Universal Fundamental Origin