Dear Karen,
I found your essay very clear! Unlike some others, it came exactly as announced in the abstract. :) I think your text is very accessible and relevant for, e.g., Master students of physics. (I would definitely have enjoyed reading such a survey at that point, to add some global perspective to more detailed courses of QFT, etc.)
Three more detailed comments on section 4:
- On p. 6 it appears that you assume the "problem of missing physics" (as Wilson calls it; i.e., the existence of gaps between theories) is only temporary. (In my own essay I have embraced the patchwork view of physics, as I think it is here to stay.) I am not sure whether rejecting patchwork is necessary for embracing the goal of physics (which you discuss at the bottom of p. 7): searching for a unique, unified, ... theory may well be the goal of physics, but I don't think it is inconsistent to admit at the same time that it is an unattainable one.
- "No weirdness" is a tricky requirement - as you may well be aware of -, since what we find weird or not strongly depends on our training and background knowledge.
- I particularly appreciate how you managed to escape Kantian worries by keeping us focused about what physics is (and isn't) about. So, I fully agree with your comment at the bottom of p. 7: indeed, physics isn't in the business of finding out what are things-in-themselves.
Best wishes,
Sylvia - Seek Fundamentality, and Distrust It.