Chris,
I think you deserve a top place within this contest for a couple of reasons:
1) You breakdown the big ideas of relativity and explain them so a layman with no knowledge of physics can get it:
"The first postulate was that Galileo's principle of relativity would be preserved."
"His other postulate states that the velocity of light should be considered constant, regardless of the velocity of the light source."
"This created a paradox because Einstein had already committed the traveler's time to run slower than the rancher's for the entire journey." [They both see the other's time as slower]
"One way is to try to show that something is happening for the traveler during his inertial motion that is not happening for the rancher."
"They would each experience a slowdown from the perspective of the other, so then what happened to the traveler that didn't happen to the rancher? Answer: he accelerated."
"Einstein equates the acceleration that the traveler experiences (as his train slows down and turns around and reaccelerates toward his stationary friend) as being the lower position in a gravitational field."
2) You get the importance of quantum physics and that quantum mechanical laws lead to the nature of time.
"What if, for example, the true mechanism for "time" is something as simple as the playing out of a bunch of fundamental behaviors on the subatomic level?"
"What if time is nothing more than a bunch of electrons, quarks, W particles, gluons, muons and more, engaging in their fundamental behaviors because there exists the energy to do so? And what if these fundamental behaviors play out in part because of the fields that these particles are swimming in. There are fields that go along for the ride, such as electric fields, and there are fields that may not be along for the ride, like the proposed Higgs field. There could also be other fields that we don't know about. What if particles that are increasing velocity through fixed fields and dragging their own fields along are somehow affecting the rate in which their fundamental behaviors can occur?"
Thank you! After reading your paper I hope everyone will start to understand "time" in the proper context.
In regard to your comment on my forum involving relativity I have a much easier answer. Acceleration is the second derivative with respect to time d^2/dt^2 = acceleration. The Schrodinger equation is first order with respect to time, d/dt and therefore a non-relativistic equation. The relativistic Klein-Gordon and Dirac equations are second order with respect to time. My idea is "space" changing and I believe the change in the rate of that changing space would alter the probability for the measured collapse. This means at the very least relativity is not prohibited but encouraged.
Thank you for the essay,
Brian Beverly