Hi Erwin and Christopher,
your essay is very well written and I like the way you approach the topic. It reminds me of Heisenberg's notion of 'closed theories', where he (in contrast to Kuhn) does not see the concepts of different closed theories as incommensurable, but that the new closed theories contain the older ones as limits. Heisenberg's defines a closed theory similar to your claim 1. He describes a closed theory as "perfectly accurate within its domain" and "correct for all time." (Citation from http://citeseerx.ist.psu.edu/viewdoc/download?doi=10.1.1.485.9188&rep=rep1&type=pdf). And continues, that a closed theory exhibit such a tight interconnectedness that not a single concept can be changed without destroying the whole system.
Here some remarks I have on your essay, with wich a basically agree:
I do not understand your remark 1 on page 2 of your essay, why the building-blocks of matter should not be considered as fundamental. By the way in my essay I show that in any realistic theory there are conventional elements.
For me unitarity must hold in order I make physical concepts well defined or measurable. It that sense it is a condition, that any empirical theory must fulfil.
Causality: yes, but what causality means is a bit modified in quantum mechanics. In my essay I try to show, that measurable physical quantities are only defined within a measurement context. But because of delayed choice experiments, the context can be set relatively late in the course of a time evolution of the system. This does not change the past state of the system as physical influence but changes, what can be considered as the causal past of a particle. For example in the beam splitter experiment a photon goes through a beam splitter A and is reflected in two mirrors in B and C. And then in D depending, on the settings, one measures either 1) the path (the photon took the path B or C) or 2) the photon went both ways as a superposition. So the casual past (whether 1 or 2 happened) is only given, after the settings in D have been fixed. The weird thing in quantum mechanics is, that the settings can be fixed after the photon has past the beam splitter A.
Finally Lorenz invariance: Lorenz invariance in terms of my essay is a necessary condition my essay to make the defining concepts of the Standard Model like mass and spin definable. But Lorenz invariance only holds if the environment (or the rest of the universe) is more or less homogenous, which is more or less the case in its current state. However if the environment changes I suppose, the fundamental concepts change which might lead to a new closed theory - different than the Standard Model. I'm not sure, whether it is possible to define unified theory, where different possible environments could be subsumed in this theory. The reason for that, is that physical concepts, can only be defined within a closed subsystem, which is separated from the rest of the universe and where the time evolution can be described by a unitary evolution.
Sorry for the maybe to long comment. Hope you find the time to read and comment on my essay.
Luca