Dear Christian
Of course, in the vicinity of BH the mass has some structure.
The problem is that it is not possible to test whether it is a Bohr like structure or another.
There are also escape velocity formulas that give values less than the speed of light near a black hole. These are also not proven formulas so far. I believe that the two approaches can be combined to produce the best result.
As I understand your essay and the formulas listed, BH does not exist. At least it does not exist as defined: "that no light can go out".
• I think you should have written that clear in the essay.
• I also think you should have mentioned those who were against the BH singularity at the very beginning of the story of BH. In order to simplify formulas your formulas lose some of the information to the reader. It's not a mistake, but I don't like it.
You are one of the few in this competition who at least tries to verify own ideas with an acceptable mathematical apparatus. That's why you deserve a high score.
Most believe that, based on their extraordinary ideas; others should get results, which would not have been able to do without those ideas. It is not without significance that your results fit into my view that matter and radiation are opposites that are constantly and eternally revolve in the universe.
Regards
Branko