Hello Professor Green,
I think that you do a wonderful job constructing a historical philosophical narrative. I thought that your essay was very interesting. Many of the essays that I have read lately are not dissimilar to mine. Have you read Daniel Kolak's I am You. Please let me know if you would be interested and I will send you a link to the pdf of the book. Kolak provides a wonderfully unique proposal on metaphysical identity. I saw a lot of material on identity in your essay:
A) "...Time-shattering would be mindshattering..." I agree (also, great adjective- "mindshattering"). For such examples of (potentially) "time-shattering" one might consider psychedelic experiences (much research is being done today in this realm. You can see the following link for just one of many examples https://mind-foundation.org/
B) "...the past is memory and is unverifiable..." From an absolutely practical perspective, yes, this seems intuitive. However, could the past ever be verifiable if causality is 'mastered' sometime in the future? Perhaps there is no "now" but there are likely events which happen in space (and time- hence we don't know when because each individual's when is nearly non simultaneous).
("...Andy Warhol summoned back memories by sniffing at perfumes he had worn in the past - his personal 'scent museum' - so that he was instantly brought back to those periods...") On remembering the past and memories evoked from scents please see https://qualiacomputing.com/. There are essays on perfume and qualia. (see Perfumery as an Art Form)
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D) It seems that this essay predominantly encompasses physical phenomena and is not related to mathematical vernacular so much.
E) "...In which way is there a future? If it can be said to 'exist', it is only as potential. And as potential, the future is not of what will happen, but of what could possibly happen, perhaps even probably happen..." You write a lot about unpredictability in the conventional sense. What about differing theories of the objective existence of time (opposed to how we perceive the chronological or even the 'realness' of events in space and time).
F) Kindly see my essay for references to various theories which might be of interest to you. I also recommend works by Deutsch and Hawking's Chronology Protection Conjecture also see more info on counterfactuals for more implications of 'could have/would have, et cetera.
G) I also recommend looking into various alternative theories of causality (e.g. top down) https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3262299/ also see theories on retro-causality too.
H) Although you wrote a conventional essay, overall, it was well written and interesting.
Best,
Dale C. Gillman