Dear Vladmir,
Thank you for your kind comment, and I am delighted you found my metaphors meaningful!
I tried to minimize commentary on the ontology of mathematics in part because a lot of scientists (wrongly in my opinion) find such discourse irrelevant to their day to day practice of science, and to what they view as scientific progress. Their argument hinges on the notion that empirical boundary demarcating the boundary of science and mathematics renders results of formal proofs and theorems of limited relevance.
I wanted to demonstrate even if a scientists chose to remain silent on the ontology of mathematics, mathematical theorems and ideas will still exert profound impact on the natural sciences simply because without mathematics we cannot say anything sophisticated and worthwhile on what we observe, measure, and experiment on.
I look forward to reading your essay, rating it, and leaving a meaningful critique!