George,
I stated above (Dec. 15, 2008 @ 18:44 GMT) that the objectives of your essay are not clear, and expressed my hope that you can do better than Carlo Rovelli.
Let me try to explain, by quoting from your postings and inserting my comments.
1. George Ellis (Dec. 11, 2008 @ 12:05 GMT):
"On this view, infinities are mathematical entities that never occur in physical reality; this may be taken as applying to the nature of space in a profound way."
2. George Ellis (Dec. 9, 2008 @ 22:41 GMT)
"The whole point of my article is that there do not exist any completely isolated systems in the real world (except perhaps the universe itself)."
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Comment #1: You quoted David Hilbert in [1] above, so please show that infinities do not, and cannot occur in describing 'the only truly isolated system' -- the universe itself. It is ONE signle system, and it should require "infinities" for its description.
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3. George Ellis (Dec. 4, 2008 @ 10:00 GMT):
"So a key element is how proper time relates to coordinate time as we move to the future, ... "
4. On Carlo Rovelli's thread,
http://fqxi.org/community/forum/topic/237
George Ellis wrote (Dec. 12, 2008 @ 20:27 GMT):
"But proper time along world lines is indeed a preferred time variable in GR."
5. On Carlo Rovelli's thread,
http://fqxi.org/community/forum/topic/237
George Ellis wrote (Dec. 15, 2008 @ 05:16 GMT)
"Objectively privileged hypersurfaces do indeed exist in standard cosmology, and in all physically realistic solutions."
6. George Ellis (Dec. 12, 2008 @ 06:18 GMT):
"Perhaps this is because all these equations are effective equations deriving from a single deeper unified theory, and it is this common origin that leads to the different times being being consistent.How this could all arise from a unified theory of quantum gravity and fundamental interactions is then what needs clarity."
7. George Ellis (Dec. 4, 2008 @ 05:21 GMT)
"You can't talk about time at all without using the concept of time. My paper is based on how standard quantum theory in fact implies the flow of time in an ireversible way. This is one of the best tested theories in physics."
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Comment #2.1: If you wish to talk quantum cosmology, by applying quantum theory to 'the universe itself' (cf. your note [2] above), then I might agree with your conjecture in note [6]. But you will need some brand new quantum theory, not the textbook one, mentioned in [7].
Comment #2.2: If you do not wish to talk quantum cosmology, the task of your whole essay is ultimately focused on your note [3], "how proper time relates to coordinate time as we move to the future", given some "preferred time variable in GR" (note [4]) on some "objectively privileged hypersurfaces" (note [5]).
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8. On Carlo Rovelli's thread,
http://fqxi.org/community/forum/topic/237
George Ellis wrote (Dec. 16, 2008 @ 12:01 GMT)
"... enabling the physical states of our neurons to succeed each other in timelike succession in a suitable causally patterned way, there is no way that consciousness can progress from one state to another."
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Comment #3:
The Appropriate Content Guidelines for this Forum include "Posts may not contain language or content that is: [...] Excessively outside of the scope of the current topic [...]". The current topic is The Nature of Time, not consciousness.
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I wish you best of luck with clarifying the objectives of your essay. If you wish to suggest, after Bill Unruh, that there should exist some "explicit (but unmeasureable) time"), please be more specific in its derivation, and then try to imagine how your ideas might help in understanding the gravitational energy -- the proof of the pudding, you know.
Dimi Chakalov