Hello everyone! I hope that I have entered the correct forum. :-)

I am a teacher of physics by occupation. I was invited to write a script and work on the visualizations for the new popular science documentary film on the topic of Laws of Nature and whether they are changing. I wrote a draft with perhaps a few additional sentences interspersed. I would like to invite you all to view the draft and discuss it in FQXI forum (or whichever way you prefer).

You can view it here (English language, 4700 words, words not emphasized in any way):

https://animagnetic.wordpress.com/2015/02/01/are-laws-of-nature-about-sentience/

Brief background

The producer set the topic and the goals: 1. to research scientifically and elaborate 2. to make it accessible for wide audience 3. to go beyond the existing paradigms or to introduce something entertaining (for short). A documentary may contain at most 7000 words. The most likely form of documentary contains 6000 words. Less is better, but some words may become images, so additional descriptions may apply.

Following a long research, I established that the story of fundamental forces still represents the key topic in physics as this describes the laws of nature. In math, the key area is dynamics. Chaos theory and information theory bring new insights, and the quantum biology is the likely next revolutionary step in science.

I touch the topic of quantum biology slightly and suggest my vision for the quantum wave collapse and quantum field, which is why I was drawn towards this particular forum.

I would appreciate any discussion, criticism, or suggestions towards further simplifications for the audience.