RubyWarbler
Thanks for this essay. If I understand you correctly, you are proposing that 'quantum corrections' should be thought of as governed by energy scale (e.g., horizon‑scale physics near black holes) rather than by length scale (as in microscopic quantum coherence). I’m not sure how you intend to bridge these very different regimes since your quantum biological examples are all low‑energy, microscopic and very strongly subject to environmental decoherence.
I'm also unsure about your use of 'entanglement' and 'macroscopic'. WRT the latter, the "microscopic and macroscopic worlds" are generally considered to "intersect" at what's called the 'mesoscopic' world, where quantum coherence and environmental decoherence compete leading to partially coherent and partially classical behaviour. For your examples of DNA proton tunnelling and photosynthetic energy transfer, you claim:
"Since it is an intramolecular transfer process, it therefore takes place on a larger, macroscopic, scale than “traditional” quantum mechanics, which focuses mainly on systems at the atomic and subatomic level.... Even in this case, the process takes place on a larger, macroscopic, scale than “traditional” quantum mechanics."
So, intramolecular doesn't mean macroscopic. AFAIU quantum biology, the relevant length and time scales here for both of these quantum effects are up to nanoscale and femto–picoseconds, thus all very firmly still within the microscopic realm or 'mesoscopic adjacent'. In contemporary usage, 'macroscopic' quantum effects refer to phase coherence over much larger scales usually at extremely low temperatures, such as for superconductivity for example. By contrast, the quantum effects discussed in quantum biology occur at nanometer scales, i.e., microscopic verging on mesoscopic and not anywhere near macroscopic. AFAIK there is currently no evidence for room‑temperature macroscopic quantum coherence in biological systems.
WRT entanglement you state:
"Entanglement is a quantum phenomenon in which two or more particles or energy states can become intrinsically correlated so that the state of one simultaneously influences the state of the other, regardless of the distance at which they are located. All this conflicts with Einstein’s theory of special relativity.... two “correlated” particles ... can communicate simultaneously thanks to entanglement"
This claim tends to conflate nonlocal correlations with communication. Entanglement does not enable faster‑than‑light signalling due to measurement outcomes on each side being locally random and the observed correlations (which can violate Bell inequalities) can't be used to transmit information without a classical \leq c channel. This is the 'no‑signalling theorem' and it is fully compatible with special relativity.
I think if you clarify these two points – on microscopic/macroscopic scale and entanglement/no-signalling – your overall argument will be more accurate and persuasive.