Dear Tom,
Having read and responded to some of your critiques I have been impressed that you usually make sense and sound authoritative. So I looked forward to your essay. On first reading I find it interesting, but platitudinal, a pastiche, not the integrated viewpoint that I'd hoped for.
As an erudite critic you cover the spectrum; Verlinde, Hawking, Gell-Mann, Einstein, Quine, Popper, Bohm, t'Hooft, Bohr, Lamport, Davies, etc. The views you espouse, from the people you quoted are reminiscent of the five blind men and the elephant; each is correct in the context of what he touches, but none have seen the elephant.
I am reminded of Feynman's Nobel Lecture, in which he says, "I also had a personal feeling, that since they didn't get a satisfactory answer to the problem I wanted to solve, I don't have to pay a lot of attention to what they did do."
As to specifics, I do appreciate that you bring in consciousness, at least peripherally. At one point you state that "conscious motion is not differentiable, in principle, from random." While, from the objective, even mathematical viewpoint, you are surely correct, from my view of reality,
conscious motion [volition] is by reason of awareness, while
random motion is for no reason at all.
It's a very different universe, depending upon which you choose as basic.
Since we've argued non-locality elsewhere, I won't clog your thread with these arguments. But you end with the observation [or conclusion, I'm not sure which] that
"information, gravity, and time are identical."
Information is not physical, it is descriptive, and contextual, and depends upon a 'framework' for interpretation. Physical reality just 'is' independent of interpretative frameworks. Nor do I find credible or sensible the idea that time = gravity.
I cannot tell whether you are just throwing this out to show how absurd things have become, or whether you are taking this position.
Normally, I look for things to support in others essays, but, visiting Rome, I decided to do as the Roman does.
Best of luck in the contest,
Edwin Eugene Klingman