Dear Dr. Corda,
Welcome to the essay contest. Since Dr. Elliot McGucken and you are my neighbors in the essays list, therefore I must visit these pages first.
All attempts to quantize gravity have utterly failed, and your attempt to quantize gravity will have the same fate; There are a lot of different Extended Theories of Gravity, including yours, which tries to enlarge the Einstein scheme through an addition of corrective terms, but all these theories are not able to explain inertia, mass and the curvature of spacetime. The complete theory of gravitational interaction must be able to explain inertia, mass, and the curvature of spacetime in the same model. Also the true theory of gravitation must be able to unify gravity with the other forces. Since your variant of Extended Theory of Gravity is not able to do it, then your approach also is wrong and even the quantization of the extended Einstein field equations can not help you.
I agree with you that the intrinsic space-time curvature may be important for Gravity, but not ''by adding an intrinsic space-time curvature to the model''. Instead you must examine how an intrinsic space-time curvature appears and how it works. In other words, you must look for physical solutions rather than for mathematical.
Also, your essay do not show, if you are in the digital or analog party. In general, I don't found any proofs in your essay that the reality is digital, analog, or digital-analog.
Sincerely
Constantin