"As an editor and writer would you make such a correction to reflect that we construct natural units and attribute them to Planck as Planck units based on his quantization hypothesis?"
Before making such a request I think it would have been nicer (and wiser) if you had first checked M. Planck's paper "Uber irreversible Strahlungsvorgange" (On irreversible radiation processes) to which I referred through Adler's article (ref. 14 in my essay). Please have a look at the last page of Planck's paper and you will see that it was indeed Planck himself who introduced those units and called them "natural units" (he defined four natural units - length, mass, time, temperature).