Dear Reeve,
Your essay is very interesting. No doubt these are very profound issues, so you'll forgive me for not yet completely understanding your proposals. I would be grateful if you would answer a few questions.
First, however, in regard to Loschmidt's paradox, let me remark that one way in which a preferred direction can emerge is through asymmetry of configuration space, even if there is no notion of time in the "classical universes" or "configurations." This happens in Barbour's shape dynamics, I believe. My version of causal theory described in my essay here also uses configuration space asymmetry, but I take causal relations to be fundamental, so my "classical universes" do have a directed structure.
Now for my questions:
1. I don't quite understand the following, and I'm sure this is a dumb question, but I want to know the answer. You say (page 3):
"Let us now consider something unconventional: Let's suppose that the heat death is actually the starting point of the system. If this was the case, how would we expect to see the system evolve over time? Since the system would begin in a state of maximum entropy, the second law of thermodynamics would tells us that the system was overwhelming more likely to evolve into states of lower entropy as time went on. The system should evolve into a low-entropy singularity."
Are you already making a finiteness assumption at this point? It seems that the answer is no, because only afterwards do you invoke the Poincare recurrence. But without a finiteness assumption, I see no reason to believe that the system would ever progress appreciably toward a low-entropy singularity; as soon as it leaves the maximum entropy equilibrium, it seems that it would tend to return. The initial phase space motion would be toward lower entropy, but I don't see how you get to the low-entropy singularity.
2. Have you looked at Cristinel Stoica's essay? He proposes a "singular" version of relativity in which information is preserved through Bing-Bang-like events. I have no idea if it is actually right, but it is serious and precise work. You might be interested in taking a look.
3. How would you relate the concept of "time" to the concept of "cause and effect?" In particular, do you believe the universe possesses distinct temporal and causal structures? The reason I ask is because some of your statements seem to accord a primary status to time; for instance, "On the other hand, if you were to travel towards the Big Bang you would see that, over time, systems would go from disorder to more and more ordered states; decreasing entropy until finally you found yourself at the "big crush" a.k.a the Big Bang. Following this thought, it is obvious that we humans should see entropy increasing overall since we are biological systems existing within a series of temporally connected events that are tilted away from the Big Bang."
Please don't interpret my questions as negative criticism; in fact, I rate your essay very high for interest and relevance even if I don't yet know to what extent I might agree with your views. Good luck with the contest, and take care,
Ben Dribus