James
It's clear dark matter is very poorly understood. As an astronomer I've been studying and analysing the evidence for many years, some of which seems even more complex and bizarre than you point out. There are dozens of papers a month published in the MNRAS with excellent new data from the many billions dollars of hardware now exploring haloes. Over half of this is inconsistent with the ruling paradigm, but the round pegs are often still jammed into odd shaped holes none the less.
The fact is that there is now far better evidence than just gravitational that 'something is out there.' Also CDM semi analytical modelling has helped to a great degree with gravitational matter density distribution, but even they can't model the complexity. (I assume you've studied the millennium simulation, if not do so. An image is in one of the essays here). Galaxy rotation curves are also far more complex than normally assumed, with virial radii related to density where the 'lock step' bodily rotation steps down. There is also much 'kinetic decoupling' now found, where the outer reaches rotate on a perpendicular axis!
An unfamiliar solution is available with which all the overwhelming 'mass' of observations fit. Of course though it also resolves a good number of related anomalies it doesn't fit the current paradigm or concordance cosmological model so won't be accepted for publication.
Consider the definition 'dark'. It was only termed that due to low luminosity and diffractive effects. diffuse plasma is now found in abundance. (mainly considered as free electrons). Plasma refractive index n=1 is the same as the vacuum. If DOES however have kinetic effects from coupling and motion (atomic scattering) and can become CO and bound molecular gas, and then be 'seen' (many good HST photo's now on the web). Plasma does of course have gravitational mass, it's thinly spread but there's a lot of space out there. Did you know Earth's own (invisible at most frequencies) bow shock contains billions of particles/c^3m? and the Voyagers have found the Heliospheric shock similar.
If you'd like an interesting new analysis check out this; http://vixra.org/abs/1102.0016 and please do also read my essay, which suggests the full consistent physical basis.
It's a crime that far more good up to date research isn't available to the public. Only a trickle get's through, so they have to live off old scraps and a pile of nonsense (not to say most current analysis is not also nonsense). Improvement is on the way in the UK at least.
Best of luck in the competition.
Peter