Dear Philip,
It is clear you have worked long and hard on remarkable essay, but I have a few comments and questions:
A clear and concise definition of the "holographic principle" was never given. What I get from context: the holographic principle - all information within a closed surface can be reproduced by knowing the flux of all the fields going through that same surface.
A clear definition of "information" is needed.
Is the same information bit used for all fields? If there is just one type of bit then how does one know which field the bit is producing? If there is a different bit type for each type of field then how does saturation in one field (gravity as seen in a black hole) saturate another field such as the electrical field?
Why do we not see a black hole-like saturation due to other types of fields?
Any volume of space could have many streams of information going through it at any given moment. At the shopping mall, you can buy glass paperweights with an imbedded pattern of tiny bubbles made crossing laser beams which over-drive phonons in the material. Over-driving phonons is many orders of magnitude less than the Plank density, but in theory, we could reach that information flow density. Could we create a black hole by beam crossing?
Pions violate chiral symmetry. We have more matter than anti-matter, so charge symmetry is violated. Symmetry breaking is sometimes said to define a field, yet you declared that entropy is declared not fundamental because it violates time-reversal symmetry. Entropy might not be fundamental, but violation of symmetry cannot be the reason it is not fundamental.
All the best,
Jeff