Hi Akinbo,
Thank you for your constructive comments. It is great to get some feedback.
I will try to answer your "dislikes" and maybe try to convince you otherwise.
1) I agree, I crammed too much in the essay, in fact I basically cut and pasted the beginning of my 3D Universe Theory as it seemed to fit nicely with the contest subject.
2) First, it is important that you really understand the difference between a UB and a CBU. (I can only ask you to re-read the paragraph slowly, sorry)
Second, space is made of "flicking" CBU's. Nothing separates them, they all "touch" each other, and where there is no matter, they form a perfect checkerboard like pattern of alternating states (existence/non-existence). A proton (basic constituent of matter) is not a CBU as such, it is a disruption in the alternating pattern of CBU's (this disruption is caused by the geometric properties of a growing sphere, see 8Pi-1).
If you are not convinced with my explanation, just take a look at the proton radius formula, I show that the diameter of the proton is just a scaled up version of the Planck Length. If you take the Planck Length and multiply it by 1020 (the scale factor) and divide it by 1-1/8Pi, you get the exact value of the proton's diameter measured with a muon. If you divide that SAME value again by the SAME 1-1/8Pi, you get the exact value of the proton's diameter measured with an electron. This 1-1/8Pi is explained in my theory (it is (8Pi-1)/8Pi).
If you are still not convinced, I also show that the proton's mass is a scaled down version of the Planck Mass. If you take the Planck Mass and multiply it by 10-20 (the scale down factor) and multiply it by 8-1/Pi, you get the exact value of the proton's mass. Again, 8-1/Pi is explained in my theory (it is (8Pi-1)/Pi).
3) I know it is boring but you must re-read the bit about the formation of CBU's, you will see that time and space are emergent just by the fact that the UB's are following the "coherent" world rule (if they were not, then the world would not be coherent and we would not exist).
The 2D/3D part takes a bit of time to get used to. It is not easy to explain, I have tried my best in my theory so, again, I can only ask you to re-read it slowly and try to picture the whole thing in your head. The 3D world is virtual (only the 2D part is real) but remember that each virtual 3D world is moving "forward" at the speed of light and expanding at the same time. Also, there are as many virtual 3D worlds as there are "present" layers. (here again, it is important to really understand the two ways to represent a "present" layer)
The units to measure space-time, depends if you are looking at it from an "internal" observer's point of view (living in a coherent world) or from an external observer's point of view (a "godlike" figure if you want). The internal observer sees space and the external observer sees time.
I hope you won't give up in trying to come to graps with my theory, it would be great to find someone that can understand what I am talking about !
Cheers,
Patrick